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This story was all over the place. It felt like it was trying to be too many genres/tropes at the same time, but not fully delving into any of them.The story is advertised as a face-slapping romance, but then they bring cultivation into the story which seems a little out of nowhere.It could have gone to really interesting places to help tie in why he was reborn but felt like a second thought just to explain some plot points and make the world more interesting.Example:Spoiler
The MC has a peach tree spirit in his palms that gives him his spiritual power to cultivate. But, after the first time the plant grows from seed to sapling, they never talk about growing it and how to cultivate it again.
The MC finds spirit stones at the beginning that act as energy for the seed to grow but then never looks for them again. The author kinda just says oh MC has been cultivating behind the scenes while he's been doing all these face slapping and knows now how to fight and use talismans but never shows us how he cultivates and levels up.
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