- #1
A decent story premise. Could have been an interesting story.Sadly, like many of these stories, it is written like a manga and not like a light novel.What little story/description/character interaction/world building is written almost as if it is describing the next drawn panel in a manga, rather than telling a story with words.I can't stress this enough, so let me say it the opposite way:All the text in this story would only be enough to fill in text bubbles in a manga, where the story is told with pictures. This is almost written as a screen play rather than a story.I have read the same 5 chapters 100 times in 100 different stories.Spoiler
MC goes to new world, kills some goblins in a forest, gains a level, then travels to the nearest town, author spends more time about sharing a room with a woman, than he did on action sequence fighting goblins and orcs.... then joins adventure guild
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