The Days of Being an Assistant for the CEO of a Mary Sue Novel Chapter -- Discussion

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I actually wanted to give it only 2.5 stars, but I hit the 5 stars accidentally.

It started pretty good but.... like what??!

The author doesn't explain anything. I thought his boss was going to be ML, but he wasn't. The author just threw in a line that MC got together with boss uncle and I am like????? Like what just happened?? More explanation would have been nice.

And the MC treats this only as a novel even after living years in it, and obviously deals with some suicidal thoughts. The author also didn't explain that clearly, and just sprung it on us.

It really shouldn't have been so short cause it compromises with the reading experience. Dumped loads of info on us and just ended like that.

This was actually a very interesting idea, but the author should have put some more work into it.
 
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