Count’s Youngest Son is a Warlock Chapter 48 Discussion

Interesting but frustrating.

When writing dialogue, proper structure is important. The reader should effortlessly be able to tell who's speaking.

That's not the case here.

The less than stellar characterization means, among the human characters, the dialogue isn't differentiated enough to easily tell who's speaking.

A lot of sentences are so oddly phrased that they feel detached from the topic at hand. It's not always the case but it happens often enough that you're constantly stopping to mentally correct and attempt to connect the seemingly disparate parts.

It feels like work and after waiting so long for releases, it leaves me tired and unfulfilled.

I'll come back to it in a year in the hope that it'll have improved.