Count’s Youngest Son is a Warlock Chapter 40 Discussion

This novel has interesting concept, family love and story where I enjoy

But the downside is the writing. I find the way of writing is mostly conversation. The explaining of the surrounding or MC's thinking is not enough to get me immerse. And when there are multiple people talking together, it's difficult to catch who talk.

[The current translation also has few errors so it's difficult to understand the story sometime]

In the beginning, the story seem a bit slow while MC try to set up his own foundation.

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MC foundation below

• • set up organization - this chapter is boring

• • darkness training - some part fun, some part just like reading boring explanation

• • sword (body) training. - There is brother interaction that I enjoy a lot.

• • getting Ratta, darkness divine beast - At this point of reading, he seem like just simple cute support type.

• • getting non human butler - The writer can portray his history into his personality very well. He is lovable with the way of learning human interaction.

• • making friend - almost sleep on their conversation....

So when it's time for MC to join a banquet... I was like ok, I will be reading another boring arc before he get to action... Then boom!! there is action at banquet and the friend, the non human butler are more useful than I though.

I previously though they are just extra with no purpose from the way the story shown...

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Once the action start, I find the story really enjoyable.

MC need to take action while hiding his darkness. He has reliable friends and family, the friend and family worry about him but they also trust his action even he has bad history with handle things.

Actually, I intend to give this 4 but I already click 5 and cannot modify... so here goes.