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It's cute, but not without problems. I'll write some good things about it later. For now-There's major problems with pacing. And I can't count the number of times the author would write 'The next day' and then proceed to mention how it had been many days since then. Like, it seemed like (at the beginning of the novel) he worked at the military for two or three days in total, but apparently he was there for a good while?