- #1
- So first he was a engineer. Which is like, ok, so you're supposed to be college age or older? So why are you letting your sister bully you into playing a phone game when you're both full blown adults?
2. Then randomly the MC has a gun? Wtf? Like at least with the glider it was built up over the course of a few chapters. Though it was iffy in the first place. I'm not saying he can't have a gun, but he didn't work for it, he just suddenly has one. Like, it makes sense to use a gun over a sword, but it just comes out of nowhere. Also if the principle behind the gun is nothing like the gun you named it after, why even do that? Is it simply to make it easier for someone to draw it? That's really lazy.
3. Not to mention you specifically said you need to train your swordsmanship for school. Why and how do you suddenly know how to make and use a gun? Simply being a "gun Otaku" doesn't work because you literally dropped that out of nowhere. It's extremely forced.
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