Villager A Wants to Save the Villainess no Matter What! Chapter 20 Discussion

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Ok so the setting is very cookie-cutter for an romance game isekai. The setting seems to almost be exactly like the setting for "hard for a mob" series. However, instead of the MC getting a single op item and using what he has to get stuff done. This MC gets op item after op item.

So far it reads like those early isekai that were based on game mechanics, where the MC just grinds to get skills. Yeah it's basically like that. While there's no real issue with that, it is very lazy writing. It doesn't help that the MC just tends to do things and it just works.

Futhermore, I can accept some silly stuff for the sake of the story, but it seems the background of the MC just gets expanded as it goes along.

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  1. So first he was a engineer. Which is like, ok, so you're supposed to be college age or older? So why are you letting your sister bully you into playing a phone game when you're both full blown adults?

    2. Then randomly the MC has a gun? Wtf? Like at least with the glider it was built up over the course of a few chapters. Though it was iffy in the first place. I'm not saying he can't have a gun, but he didn't work for it, he just suddenly has one. Like, it makes sense to use a gun over a sword, but it just comes out of nowhere. Also if the principle behind the gun is nothing like the gun you named it after, why even do that? Is it simply to make it easier for someone to draw it? That's really lazy.

    3. Not to mention you specifically said you need to train your swordsmanship for school. Why and how do you suddenly know how to make and use a gun? Simply being a "gun Otaku" doesn't work because you literally dropped that out of nowhere. It's extremely forced.

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Anyway this series is not to be taken seriously, it doesn't take itself seriously, so you shouldn't either. It's a time waster, don't go in expecting much more.
 
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