- #1
The first few chapters were okay, with minor plot armors here and there, like being an engineer in his past life.but the school ark comes in and here's when things go bad;Spoiler
- first of all, the story is highly identical to mobuseka; with the duel and the villainess being ganged up on. If you haven't read mobuseka yet, try, you'll see close resemblances that I haven't even mentioned.
- second, there are too many useless POVs, the story would still be fine without them.
- and lastly (this is more like a TL issue), Some actions here don't make sense; like kneeling and thanking their liege? Come one, you've got to do better than that.