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The villain... they're so s*upid braindead with no redeeming quality. Villain that is just bad is sign of bad writingThe MC... beginning is fine but when the final arc comes his brain becomes so smooth that it's infuriatingSpoiler
Firstly he doesn't kill people that matter... why? why not? you know amy is weak af and a lot of problem will be solved if u just killed her
Second he tries to request anything to the king after accomplishing something while mocking him s*upid...I....I just can't understand why MC thought king will honor his promise. The only thing that'll be gained from this is just moral high ground but do you still need more than what already is?
Third the jade order literally mention anna will be wed to the est magician and MC still wonder ooooh where did anna gooooooo??? it's like the author nerfed his brain last second to make more conflict
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