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Copy of mobisekai that actually tried to change some things but ultimately resulted in okay~ish story.I actually liked that the story focused on one heroine and delivered their romance, from classmates of different status to actual marriage. They also started dating quite quickly, which was a surprise. Another surprise was brutality of some scenes and MC actually killing people. Unfortunately Allen himself is your typical "Sasuga MC-sama" that gets what he wants without many difficulties, even when he's a commoner dealing with high-class aristocrats.He's also quickly becoming super-op, with multiple cheat skills and easily solves problems that reward him with great benefits.Most of the characters fall flat, at least in mobisekai we had Luxion to bantz with Leon so there was constantly something going on, here Allen is mostly alone and even when he meets someone, he gets glorified as hell at each step. He also constantly says how he must be stealthy with his anti-destiny plans yet constantly does opposite of it - like rapidly clearing dungeons and offering thousands of magic cores as a "weak adventurer that just started out".Author had quite interesting idea to show some of the events in the story from multiple perspectives, usually the heroine and game heroine, but in the end they became annoying as most of them are copied dialogues and scenes from the main story but with the added thoughts of Amy/Anna. That said, Amy at least tried to be entertaining one-dimensional villainess.I must say that it's actually good thing that the whole story is 100chapters long, at least it's quite compact and reads fast + it's quite refreshing to see actual logical ending when the characters reap what they sow.3.5/5