Villager A Wants to Save the Villainess no Matter What! Chapter 36 Discussion

The story skips around too much and the characters are just poorly writen caricatures.

I thought I would give it to the school life portion of the story because that's where the meat of the plot is, but the author still just keeps skipping big chunks of time. Many events are explained in summary or after the fact.

The worst parts are the side characters, though. Anastasia seems fine, but she's a one trick pony. The author seems to think that an ideology is a personality. Hell, even the ideology is nuts. Spoiler

Yet again we have someone defending monarchy by just stateing "I care about the people because they give me taxes!" Over and over while also writing about a society with extreme rates of illiteracy, child labor, and poverty. This is what the good side believes because Mr. Author thinks that having a villian say "People are created equal" in a smug voice destorys any opposition to his dumb system.

Still, it's not just that deslutional misunderstanding of his own system that bothers me. The entire character of Amy is an overplayed trope in itself.

"Huhuhu, it's the main character of the original game, but she's also possessed by a Japanese person and she's eviiiiiil!!"

Wow, so special.

Its not even well done here...

Look, I understand that the MC is going to be smarter than some random high school girl, but the author writes that sort of blatently malicious character with everything just short of a point.

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Anyway, don't bother with this. There are plenty of other stories just like this that are better written, better paced, and more engaging. I'm sure you can find 3.

I am sincerely upset that the author of this swill won any place at any award at any time for this mistake of a web novel and I hope that he eventually writes something worth a damn.