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It's a fun-enough nation-building story at the beginning, with interesting fights and technology leaps. But the further it goes on the more the author tries new and less-interesting ideas. Spoiler
Now we're stuck with a past-life lover commanding Imperial forces attacking the village.
[collapse] We don't need any odd complications, they're not interesting and just confuse things. Do something like: imperial noble was running the situation, when MC rebelled, noble hid the situation until he couldn't anymore, then it was revealed. Now a more powerful army division is coming to fight the village.