Spit Out When Bitter, Swallow When Sweet Chapter Completed Discussion

  • Thread starter Velstad
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It starts pretty good and the story is almost entirely good, I like the pacing for most of the story, not too slow not too fast. But then it fumbles the ending. We learned things slowly, but then in the last 3 or 4 chapters things go way too quickly, the ultimate truth plus the climax plus the epilogue in just 3 short chapters? It’s way too quick to end the story, but a rushed ending is better than no ending or a bad ending, and despite being rushed it wasn’t a bad ending, so it’s worth a read to me
 
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