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False advertising. Just say that the mc’s lover is more important than her brother if that’s how you’re going to write. Also, the ML is total crap, I just want to say. He’s an immature control freak who can’t sort his feelings out.The MC *does* fall for him, but it was 100% forced. She didn’t have a choice to *not* fall for him. He’s literally taking all her pain and suffering away while also watching and controlling her every move.Her little apartment is a place he goes whenever he wants, he slept in her bed uninvited bc he can, and he used her as a body pillow twice before he even sorted out his feelings, and made clear what their relationship is. Oh and I forgot the several s*xual assaults where the MC was clearly resisting and finding any possible excuse to get out of while also keeping her life.Everything is on *his* terms whether the MC wants it or not. The author also uses mc’s brother is as a prop every single time to further annoy the ML and make him awaken even more unnecessary possessiveness. Why the f*ck is he getting jealous of her literal *brother* in the first place?Like why’d you even bother with that summary? It’s 100% misleading. It’s bc you know that your summary is better click bait than an accurate summary. I just don’t know why you’d make a really intriguing summary and then veer as far away from that as possible the more you write. It literally makes no sense.