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It was fine at first and I was interested in how the FL and brother relationship would pan out, but after ch4 my interest got less and less. At this point I'm just reading because I'm too lazy to switch to something else.To be honest, I don't mind the ML too much. Fiction isn't reality and I'm not against MLs who are sadistic and cruel and cause the MC to suffer. I'm also fine with the OFL, she's the type of character I love to hate. I even like the MC when she's being wimpy or a little silly. I don't even mind Mary Sue MCs as long as it's interesting! It's the writing problems that bother me.1. Author very often falls into the CN novel pitfall of overly praising the MC. Less than a day after MC posts her first basic chibi comic, she's being treated as a treasure by a bigshot in a new webcomic company. There are so far no negative comments on her (only!) webcomic series, only immediate fans. Everyone loves her no matter what.2. Problematic author. There's a chapter where a character says her daughter is "slightly autistic but the doctor said it can be cured if treated early enough". There's even more anti-autistic rhetoric scattered throughout the whole novel. I think it's good that the translator/s didn't make the TL less accurate by changing it, but I am upset at the author for writing it in the first place. I can only hope that the author has learned better now.3. The MC flipflops character, like the author doesn't really know what she should be like and is just making her whatever is needed for the scene. Sometimes she's a cowardly introvert who just wants to stay home and work, other times she's a white lotus schemer who knows what she's doing. It's more ironic because the reason given for OFL being annoying is that she's a white lotus (though now I think she's more of a green tea b*tch) but sometimes MC acts the same way.4. Inconsistent writing, to a really obvious extent. You'll see when you read it.I sort of feel like I just ate cold leftovers. I satisfied my hunger (boredom), but I'm not happy.