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The premise for this series is fairly unique. That being said, it seems as if the author loses sight of the characteristics that define the premise almost immediately.Rather than spend time exploring the unique situation that protagonist is in, and show him come to terms with being a single mind in control of two separate bodies, the author dismisses the entire situation; the protagonist is able to overcome any potential difficulties instantly do to a convenient natural ability to simultaneously split his awareness. Additionally the two bodies are almost immediately separated, after which point the author begins developing them as distinct individual characters. The only time the author seems to remember the two bodies are actually a single personality is when it is convenient for the plot's progression.The plot itself is illogical and rather broken. The author altogether ignores simple solutions to various conflicts in order to drive the story in a specific direction, often leaving those conflicts unsolved and forgotten. The result is a work that is more frustrating to read that it is enjoyable.