After Transformation, Mine and Her Wild Fantasy Chapter v1164 Discussion

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The whole two bodies, one mind gimmick lasts for about 5 chapters. Then it turns into generic male protagonist and generic reverse haram protagonist with two separate plots have a telepathic connection. The plots are almost completely separate for about 40 chapters before slowly converging until they finally in the same place around chapter 60 and talk to each other around chapter 100. It fluctuates a lot. At times they seem like same person but at others they aren’t even on the same page. They are two separate people

The plot itself is not bad but it does get cliche and generic at times but it gets good at times. It’s not really my cup of tea and I mostly read it in hopes that the gimmick will be redeemed but it never really happens. The characters are ok and some of the plot points were interesting. Read this for the plot and world, not the gimmick the description is advertising.

More ranting about the gimmick:

I think the biggest problem with gimmick is that the two separates way too quickly. There is no real establishment of the two as the same person apart from the first 5 chapters. There is so much to work with: male in female body, trying to establish their own quirks, unconscious quirks, and most of all, how other people would perceive these two people acting the exact same at times. There are so much comedic potential for such a scenario. It can also be very creepy seeing two people acting exactly the same or even close to the same. People might like one, hate the other, or just love/hate both. Sometimes it almost seemed like it would explores but never went anywhere.

It’s very similar to the anime Ranma 1/2. That show’s gimmick is almost the same except for it’s a gender switching body instead of two bodies. The male character switching genders does almost nothing to his personality and a lot of the comedy and plot derives from how other characters act towards the main character. It never meets the same problems this novel does because he can’t be separated from his female side, but the separation could lead to some interesting scenarios.

This gimmick can be down but it ultimately was only used as a hook line for the very beginning before completely falling through.
 
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