- #1
Really amazingly good, though it's basically all character development and plot is pretty much non-existent - at least as far as I've gotten, the whole story is entirely focused on the two main characters and their relationship, with the rest of the cast, and the rest of the world, being barely mentioned. And yet it's still awesome...The biggest issue is the translation quality, which is pretty iffy - machine translation with limited editing, I think. It wasn't too much of a problem for me, though, since the writing still manages to come through. It definitely made me seriously consider offering my services as an editor, though, since I feel this story deserves a more easily readable presentation. Though as I said, the story and the writing still come through.I can definitely recommend this to anyone who likes their yuri to be character driven rather than plot heavy, and who's willing to invest a bit of effort in getting past the translation quality. Patience and understanding of the release rate is also important - three releases a week seems great, until you find yourself screaming for more as soon as you run out of chapters...Edited as of ch164:Updating this review to basically just say it again: this is so good, if anything getting better. The slow burn might make you wonder if things will actually progress or just end up bogged down, but I can happily report that things are progressing, nothing is bogged down, and I'm still obsessively updating the site in the hope of getting a new chapter. And the new chapters are still coming fast.