If You Desire Me Chapter Completed Discussion

4/5 before they got together (I love chasing arcs lol), 3/5 once they do get together.

MC isn’t my favorite type of Omega (pretty, weepy twink) but I like his whole background story with ML - childhood friends, unrequited love. When he decides to give up his one-sided love, the chasing arc begins, and I had so much fun with that. Spoiler

Both chasing arcs lol. If they had added a third chase, though, I would have thrown hands lol

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ML is one big handsome ball of denial Spoiler

and apparently it was because he was raised that way, and also because he was taught to reject it if he ever developed feelings for a “recessive” omega because dom alphas should always be with dom omegas and anything else would be “abnormal”.

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Once they get together they face one last hurdle Spoiler

ML’s parents, which is resolved pretty quickly through the power of BABY, yay.

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The side story feels like a whole lot of nothing lol. I’m a bit puzzled over Spoiler

how advanced baby Doha is. He is a year old, but speaking in sentences like a 2-3 year old? Anyway.

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The translation could be a little better. I say this in all my reviews where I have issues with the translations: that I really shouldn’t complain because they’re free, but anyway, maybe something to improve in the future is the POV confusion. Some chapters switch from 1st to 3rd person and back again, leaving me all confused. Please decide what it’s supposed to be and save your readers from a headache.