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What I love so much about this story is, how well the character development is. The interactions between each character feels so natural.The minus, there are few coincidences (or plot holes) that makes the story's pace too rushed in some moments. But overall, the story's pace is just right. And maybe you can ignore the plot holes.Spoiler
MC and ML's relationship is really slow paced. Started from dog-and-master, then little-son-and-father (no, only Shen Shian think himself as the father), possessive-younger-brother-and-his-older-brother.
[collapse]About ML's transformation, check one spoiler under this. Warning!! (Or not) SpoilerI'm very much waiting for ML to grow up become a man. Yeah, there's still no indication for ML's transformation and I've read the latest chap (93).
[collapse]SpoilerI love their team building, from only MC and ML, then added six more peoples with their own power and characteristics. Each from different encounter with MC, MC helped them. All of them admired and obeyed MC. It's beautiful!
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