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I quite liked the beginning, and I suppose the forgiving MC gives enough for a small 2... so why no more ?i was sorry to read about the zombies in the synopsis, but the writer herself burned the surprises by doing a count down... as it is, I can’t help thinking how sad : I would never have guessed, and it was nice. Among other reason for not guessing the mysterious dog part was way in the end that and the buddha beeds was way enough to make me interested, it was cute, fun, and of course strange enough to entertain... alas again, sometimes less is more, and too much info kills the info... So after a while it became a zombie apocalypse / fantasy mix story and that should still be fine, but it also became a food or*y story (yes humans eating mountains of meat in the end of time, somewhat more discusting to me that zombies diet), and after that a « sims s story, and a romance (?)... yes ! it’s all over the place... luckily the fashion or*y part as « dress my ultimate fantasy main character doll », is not too invasive, but the over the top descriptions of that splendid she male, oups, manly, but androginous, or was it handsome and slightly feminine... ? Whatever so beautiful that he’s everyone dream girl / rr guy... is well a bit muchthe MC And ML have a relationship that goes from pet owner to parent, to... lover ? Ha if it was not written in the synopsis, i’d say I would never see it coming... but well, it doesn’t feel like anything actually... one part is somewhat of an alien godly monster, and the other a supersayen teenager genius, super pretty gifted boy... (did I say caricature ?) like so many things, it’s a bit « over the top ? », and very diluted with well food, and what is it market economy ? Or a bit of sf things or stern yet superficial visions of humans greed or politics ?it could have been nice, there were family background, and even a end of the word story (wait : it’s the end of the world right ? - because between lunch and super...) but every bit of story comes so far and between... everything zombie you already know (power, nucleus, level ec) could have been spiced up by the fantasy part, there were a few personal stories to develop, but you can barely find them in thi huge mash up, to me it’s only good to read if you got a flue, are very tired and don’t mind scrolling alot - like I obviously did. There are a few nice chapters here and here, but I would also think it was already slippery, and it became far worse, when the author did add romance (a new terrible diversion from a very lost and awkward plot) mzybe it’s true of these web novel, but this one is really a sad thing, I wouldn’t dare qualifying the artist, but the plot is immature. It needed more direction, decisivness, strong choices (if you want to wtrite a fantasy novel about a idol cooking star, why add zombies or intergalatic evil in there... or even romance ?)