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it's good, it's just that the MC is an psychopath 11 (actually 40y) year old, but aren't all Chinese mc's already? Spoiler
also the other characters seem to miss things, like tony not being able to tell he was the killer, even when he just "scanned the vitals" which means heart beat, so he could tell the MC was calm enough to sleep at the mu*der scene, when he was faking his snot face. And how was hermione not scared of the guy who just beated up various people, and his reasoning on why she'll accept that, was the "she pulls pranks, and don't follow the rules" like that excuses her indifference to violence, of draco getting his tooth knocked out, we know the MC is an psycho, since the MC was about to sleep right after his first mu*der, like 10mins after, but don't make her one as well
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