Supreme Swordsman of the Nine Heavens Chapter 179 Discussion

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It's kind of bad. The writing style is just not good at all, there's too much telling instead of showing. Like instead of having the character witness something cruel and question it through dialogue or other ways, the author is just like "Mu Yu thought about the cruelty of it all". I know what the author is trying to tell, but it's just very forced and makes me cringe.

The characters and interactions are kind of lame as well. MC and his senior sister's interactions come off as kind of unnatural and more childish than I'd like, and then he suddenly develops a crush on her despite her not having any good aspects shown in writing... Forced.

There's another character called Ximen Buixue or something, who's supposed to be a funny playboy, but he's just not funny, and he's more of a creep. The banter between him and the MC also comes off as unbearably cringe, and drags on for too long.

Overall, if you're sensitive to baaaaaaad writing like me, don't even bother. The author didn't get any better after 100ch.
 
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