- #1
At twenty chapters in, this story has picked up a lot of really common plot concepts, but it doesn't introduce or juggle them well. As a result tone and its focus is all over the place, and it doesn't have the writing necessary to carry that weight. Rather than have these issues feel like the result of being stuck in a bad story world (as it should), it just ends up a mess. It could have been fun, but instead I have to recommend giving it a miss.