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One example of this: During the shooting contest, he only needs to score 10 points below the heroine to impress the hell out of her and everyone else, in fact, it probably would have been a better result that way. Instead, "oh, let's max this skill that I will probably never need to use after today" and win the contest with a perfect score.
[collapse]For instance, we don't know anything about the main character's past life, except that he memorized every detail of that kind of novel including the favorite ice cream of a sub heroine and the exact painting another heroine wants and which park he has to practice Tai Chi in to impress the side character who has it. And has a waifu from the novel. And is still somehow an expert on love and the ability to manipulate businesses and various other abilities even without considering all the skills the system hands him for free.For instance, it's all about the novel. There are countless beautiful women and opportunities in the world, but aside from the characters who were heroines in the source novel and the opportunities that the original protagonist had, this main character has no interest.SpoilerOnce a certain bodyguard appeared as a possible "capture target" before he said "I'm not interested in her" to the system, I had to question why, say, Song Xuan or his cousin were never added to the list. Especially Song Xuan, who he flirted with heavily and actually seemed somewhat into, and who was very related to the main plot. And a wealthy billionaire businessman from a strong family with the talents he's shown could easily make connections without having to copy story events from the original novel, like the Tai Chi thing mentioned earlier.
[collapse]For instance, the author constantly refers to 18-19 year old women (college students!) like they're children, including one 18 year old who for some reason thinks she still has a chance to grow big b**bs like her mom despite being flat at 18. Meanwhile the main character and several of the heroines own successful businesses in their early 20s like it's natural, and also have their parents worried for them because they're not engaged/married yet.The main issue is just that the story isn't ambitious enough and just traces a generic [non-existent] urban harem story but lets the villain do the face-slapping and get the harem. It's still relatively fun, just full of holes; if you read it in a bad mood you will probably regret it, but if you read it in a good mood and can forgive the problems, it will be a good read.