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I totally agree with Legendoras, everything he said is true.Well, personally I think this novel had potential and all components required for a good novel, sadly it was poorly executed...The MC's cheat is dumb, he can basically have any skill he wants to divine level by little efforts. He can aquire and boost his skills like this (basic => medium => advanced => divine level) maybe 1 more level but it doesn't matter, it feels dumbly OP, I can imagine when cultivation will be later introduced (maybe in chapter 3000 lol) he will be like this (basic cultivation => up to divine or the like).The pace is soooo slow, one annoying thing is that dozens of chapters are for a day or an event in a day, in "I Became the Rich Second-Generation Villain" this is enough for an arc. Also it feels unrealistic, because even though the pace is slow but many things happen in a day, the author could have made those events in months and it would've been more believable how the heroines characters' development change. Also there are some young heroines, it would have been more logic if they were 12-14 and not 18, because they act like kids of less than 10years, also he went for one's mom so more reasonable to make them the age they act like.One annoying thing is the censorship, it seems the author want a wide range of readers but he has to make unreasonable things to justify it, like the age matter, or sometimes he intends to show you hot ecchi scenes but they're not what they're truly are, it feels like I read a novel in mosaic, and other times it will leave you blueballed.A really annoying and poorly executed novel.This is basically a low grade version of I Became the Rich Second-Generation Villain, you can't even feel that the protagonist is a villain, he seems like a protagonist than a villain.I advise you to drop this and read I Became the Rich Second-Generation Villain, and if you did read I Became the Rich Second-Generation Villain, there's nothing here better to read just skip it.