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IDK why did I even bother reading this thing... I'll give it 2 star though simply because it wasn't MTL and tried to be something even if it failed miserably. But! I don't even want to call this a novel. It seems like a jumbled up thoughts/dream a one piece fan once had and wrote it down as a draft; but in the end forgot to expand upon it. Honestly I do not want to go on a rant on this. I'll just make a few points.1- This is no better than a MTL (maybe slightly) 2- The entire novel could be fit into 10 chapters if even that3- My literal feelings can just be explained as: My dudes what happened? is this the world of one-piece? we sure? I mean we sure we read the same manga and watched the same anime?4- The story (?) ... it just went nowhere. All the journey the unique things/creatures/islands was the point of once-piece but this is just so one dimensional.5- Finally, there wasn't even a proper ending... Honestly man this is just a massive waste of time for both author and the readers. At bare minimum please follow the 5 Stages of the story. even if it's not all 5 there at least has to be a rising action and climax to the story... WAIT! was there even a story in there somewhere?? (no there wasn't) I digress. As you can see there was a lot of question but no answer. If you must read... like if you really really really have to just read the first 4-5 chapter and move on. Take my word for it it's really not worth it.
