I Reincarnated as the Mob Flame User Destined to Die in the Early Stages of the Game, but When I Cleared the Event Before the Protagonist, the Heroines Followed Me Chapter 58 Discussion

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The premise and the plot of the story is decent, but the quality of the writing is what I would call 'beginner webnovel' - the author doesn't know how to write a good story so it's all a sequence of events without much detail.

Beyond that, the plot of the story, while not entirely predictable, doesn't hold any exciting surprises either.

Finally, there's zero characterization for any of the heroines so they're all as flat as cardboard.

It was somewhat interesting at first, enough to keep reading following the momentum of the story, but now that I've caught up with what's been translated (and the translator has dropped it) I realize I'm not interested enough in the story to hope for someone else to pick it up or bother with MTL.
 
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