Shatei Kyokufuri Yumi-Ojisan Chapter 53 Discussion

Well this is my first or second VRMMO novel, so you could call me VR noob. I don't really like this genre, but for a novice like me, who doesn't really care about the things other reviewers mentioned, this novel was rather enjoyable so far.

What pains me however is the childishness of some of the dialogue or interactions between the MC and other characters

MC is an "old man" as he calls himself, but some of his inner thoughts sound like ones of a 10 year old, it kind of breaks the immersion.

Spoiler

Before this a tsun character (I think) sent him a friend request. She explains it messily as tsuns do. Those are his thoughts:

"Hmm... I don't understand.

But it sounded nice enough.

And so I would react accordingly."

This may seem exaggerated, but after a few times, it starts to get bothersome.

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All in all, you just have to turn off your brain is some place and you'll pull through.

What I find appropriate on the other hand is the way people don't treat the game too seriously - the game stays just a game - and I like this.

Summarizing: I recommend this to beginners in the genre.