Shatei Kyokufuri Yumi-Ojisan Chapter 14 Discussion

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The story was pretty standard.

The MC is correct in not changing his equipment before the start of the tournament. Archers are like any athlete they have equipment that suits their needs, in this case since the tournament was about to start the MC had no time to adjust to a new type of equipment.

I am also disappointed that the world building of the game is soo bad. First how can a reader believe that the MC can one shot every other player in the tournament if we do not know how health is measured in the game is it an hp bar or is health based on the condition of the body. Second how can the reader believe that the MC can use his skills if the mp usage is not shown. Third how can understand the geography of the game if the explanations are vague.

truthfully I quite like this simple type of story but it would have been more engaging if the environment of the MC in game was shown in more detail.
 
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