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Plot holes!!!Plotholes everywhere to the point it made this novel looked like a bee nest!I'm not the most thorough or acute person, so usually I will miss plotholes when I read a novel, but when it came to a fanfiction of original works that I like such as Marvel, the plotholes can't be more obvious.The most noticable plothole that keep disturb my mood in the whole novel is the inconsistency of MC's knowledges about Marvel verse.In the very first chapter, it was depicted that MC was supposed to be a hardcore fans of Marvel, especially Avenger series, to the point he know about the plot of Avenger series until Avenger: Infinite Wars that MC watch in movie right before he transmigrated.But then MC sometimes act like he didn't know a jacksh*t about the plot, even though he will always recognize the famous characters.He supposed to be able to prevent the death of some important characters, like for example black phanter's dad.If he supposed to be Marvel's hardcore fans, he should know that the dead of black phanter's dad will spark the civil wars between Avengers members, but he act like an ignorant bystanders. It's like the author was too lazy to change the major plot and keep it going like in the canon.This kind of inconsistency will be found throughout the entire volumes, and later the author will made a lame excuses such as the transmigration made the MC's memory going hayware, or something like that.Come on!! This is fanfiction!! You should be creative and make a change that different from the canon!!!If you only copy paste from the canon then what is the point reading this novel? It's no different from watching the original movies but with the addition of new character with cheat.