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(ignore the star. I didnt give any ranking but it just appeared) this could have been great. like, I like this kind of concept. but the execution is just... a little confusing. to be honest, it feels like a fanfiction almost. there are so many things I didnt understand. no, this is not delayed exposition, its more like, not explaining anything at all.Spoiler
- when MC was conviced the novel's plot changed, over 1 minor change.
- when the men were all over the MC for no reason. it feels forced.
- I dont understand MC's thought process sometimes. she cried over something but I didnt understand why.
- the random b*ner that appeared out of nowhere. like, why, sir? what happened that made you like this? I dont know what is happening help
[collapse]tldr; maybe the author intended the readers to figure it out themselves, but im not figuring anything out. maybe its just me, but I personally cant deal with this im sorry. if someone knows what the hell is going on, please, tell me. I also would like to know.