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I've read countless novels eerily similar to this one already. It brings nothing new and exciting to the table. Standard "face slapping" novel with a female MC that praises her to the heavens at any opportunities. She's supposed to be fair and strong of mind, but ends up being far too long winded and weak in most respects. I mean any supposedly respectable woman who can't even stand her ground due to being in the presence of a beautiful man is pathetic. She's not a cold and intelligent woman, she's a 12 year old girl who just met Justin Bieber.The female MC despite what everyone else will tell you is not OP at all. She has great talent and progresses fast, but the way the story is written she will never be OP. The ones that antagonizes her will always be much stronger than her and only the servants of said person might be at the same level as her. Leaving it to the ML to be the one that's actually OP who has to save the day at the most important parts.In any case that's just my personal issues with these stories which I always hope will finally bring a strong female MC with mature thinking, but always falls far too short. The issues with the author isn't anything new either. Bet I could pick out a random neighbor who writes just as good. The whole story hinges on misunderstanding which would not exist in any other universe than that which is this authors (and many others like it) novel. Tens of chapters of arguing like little children, one short sentence at a time. A good chapter is one where there are more than 4 lines of dialogue. Instead we get a couple of lines of talking and 20 lines describing this new beautiful dude or the ML. The little dialogue we get is abysmal as well considering those "conversations" that spans tens of chapters in the end leaves the people misunderstanding each other despite the situation being so damn easy to interpret just by looking that you didn't need to spend those tens of chapters speaking about this to begin with. These supposedly super strong, super intelligent people can make a discussion about apples turn into an entire arc that deals with yet another idiot that wants to kill MC over nothing, or the MC or ML starting god damn wars due to being jealous for no reason and refusing to act like god damn adults.In the end it's a sh*t novel. If you like novels that hype up the female MC with her falling short in every way and introduces hot man children who interacts with this failure of a woman for some reason, and the gaggle of women who loves these man children so much that any other person (MC, always just MC) who gains their interest is put on the top of their list of people who will die TONIGHT! Also a plot that because of the ineptitude of the author not evolves to be more interesting, but instead becomes more and more complicated in idiotic turns of events that makes no sense...Then go on and read it. You'll never finish it though, only a select few people are capable of that kind of seizure inducing task. Go read the spoilers on the forum when you get tired and end it.
