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I agree with another reviewer that the story is mostly well written... I can’t say well written because I dislike the writer repeating information.If it was a small reminder, it wouldn’t be so bad, but it’s repeated as if you never knew in the first place.For me, that implies the writer is more padding the story.There was plenty of other plot points I was interested in, so I tried to push on. But I couldn’t take it anymore by the 12th chapter (that probably could’ve fit in 6 or 7).