- #1
Respectfully, the plot and characters are incredibly rushed, and characters have no logic. I am a beloved fan of dog-blooded cliche plots for the sake of entertainment, but this just ain't it. The plot and time spent (words written) on the characters are just way too little, so their actions are just unsubstantiated. Now if this with PWP or just straight smut, then all would be forgiven—but it's not. It's barely explicit or smutty enough to cover for the non-logicality of the plot.Author tries to play MC as a dramatic actor/sexacoholic that enjoys forceful play, but imo the "play" is not even good. It's basically vanilla with no lube (MC a fake hoe if he into that mediocre performance) The shortness of the chapters and undeveloped characters makes me believe that this story was just concepts a new writer wanted to explore, but not actual meant for a fully-fledged novel.+3 stars just for the translators beautiful sweat and tears :,) >>