- #1
- Too much unnecessary dialogue
- Npc and bystander even kids often became commentators watching the show
- Many plot holes
- Reckless and overconfident mc
- Brainless villains who eagerly come forward to be humiliated
- Their thoughts being said aloud especially the villains
- Marry sue mc
- The Villains have the same script
- the goal of villains was to absurd
- all character had low IQ
- the same routine became boring
- too often face slapping
- long winded fighting style
- often dawdle in fight before the enemy suddenly became power up or suddenly got seriously injury of her own carelessness only then she would quickly trying to finish off the enemy (repetitive)
- author trying to build emotional touching scenes but failed
- I don't care whether MC had bright mind, but why other characters not smart too
- most of side characters personality copy paste
- MC HAVE STRONG PLOT ARMORS
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