The Yellow-Haired Villain in Soaring Phoenix’s Novels Also Desires Happiness Chapter v170 Discussion

Well, the story is quite good, for me yes, as long as the TL can be a bit better. I mean, from the TL alone, there so many mistake, especially about the gender, THAT is a FATAL MISTAKE, cause it literally ruin my reading experience. I mean, I came to read a translated novel for REAL, yet why is the one I open is a MTL :).

Nevertheless, is okay for me just causing a bit of reading experience loss, cause I sometime do read MTL from novel that I really wanted to know the continues, but this story is not that kind that let me enjoy MTL, yeah, not to the point of so interesting that I wanted MTL to know.

That aside, here my thought about the story:

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Simply, the story here got the premise of MC transmigrated to a story, became some kind of side chara, get a golden finger that let him know his predetermined death, and to avoid that get a hint to go along with the story to stay alive. Some people said that MC is naive and whatnot, well honestly, it kinda realistic action, I mean that golden finger show how he is supposed to live, so what? Make the MC do the exact reverse of that? Why would you think that the right answer? The golden finger already blatantly told him how to survive, and that to go along with the story.

About how he talk after the escape, well why would you find fault with the man who barely escape, he just wanted to enjoy it with shouting FREDOOM AT LAST, just let the man be alright, that to just for a second, not a ridiculous thing that got repeat again and again, it just for one time :)

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For the overall story, well a bit cliche but nice enough. But I don't think the placement of random event is quite good in here. Yeah, it feel a bit forced but okay enough to feel not, well it for character development, but can be a little bit nicer and smoother though. I presume the author is still need more experience with that. And yeah it quite nice to pass time.

Lastly, it a bit shame for the TL to drop it, the reason being not get enough view they said, heh.... Well that is no wonder, I mean from TL quality from the very first 10 is mostly like MTL, no wonder the rating is low. So to appreciate the story, I gave it 4 stars