- #1
After reading half the novel, the only thing I'd say is, it's too plain and boring. Though I like the MC, everyone else is dull. ML is cold and distant, yet warm against MC and the kid. The kid is just too appalling, he's probably the worst kid I've read in a childcare novel. He's an adult trying to be a kid and just kept on asking for this s*upid uncle. The MC is a great character, a mary sue type, yet a bit interesting, but having ML trying to use the kid to get close to her, and her not resisting at all. I don't think this should even be happening, people like her would get annoyed if they are getting cornered, yet she just flows with it.The whole story is just uncle trying to coax a kid to get into mom's pants or this girl trying to suppress MC. There isn't even any pressure at all, everything is just easy, and gets solved by mc's greatness. Other characters are friend or foes, the comments are just "this lady gud, and that girl bad". The antagonist are just people who are worse than her in every way, and the friends are hardworking.The writing quality, plot, character development aren't really that impressive. The writing is just explaining nothing, to point out greatness and s*upidity. The plot, you'd literally know everything because the author kept on reminding you, the character development is just MC getting more and more perfect, yet because of annoying baby, getting close to ML, which shouldn't be the case. I think the story would be better off if the MC told the ML not to go overboard and create a line between them. This ML is just plain creepy, not a hint of sweetness existed between the two.The dialogues for the most part goes ooc, it's plain and redundant, this is the most boring part of the novel.I wanted to rate it worse, still I think some would like it, because of the slow pace, and the interesting MC. I neither like nor hate this story, I'd probably finish it and just forget about it.
