I Was Expelled From the Hero’s Party, but Because I Can Create Legendary-Class Items, My Territory Has Become the Strongest Chapter 15 Discussion

  • #1
I generally do not bother leaving reviews for stuff like this, but this one has more negative reviews/ratings than it probably should.

Before I get into what seems to be the issues causing that, let me review the series this far. This is a dime a dozen power trip story set in a "sword and magic" fantasy world. This is a really fast read with really short chapters, such that I wouldn't be surprised if the translators could do 3-20 chapters a day if they focused on it. Probably the only semi unique things about this is the MC's attitude and that he probably deserved being fired.

Now addressing the issues that the other reviewers have discussed.

Spoiler

First the MC's attitude: the MC is a teen, but don't think of him as a weak Japanese teen rather think of him as an American teen from like the 90s. He is c*cky, a brat and thinks he knows best, but generally followed authority, at least until authority tossed him aside, thus freeing him. He is OP, and knows it, and as a c*cky teen, it reinforces his attitude, but I don't think he actually knows how far out of the norm he is.

Second, regarding the firing. He was hired to do a job to essentially do stuff with materials and earn the party extra income, and if not doing that, then assisting in the killing. Was he doing the job? Maybe at one time, but by the time of the firing, no, he got too tied up in a side business of helping the country without pay, and for the killing side, pretty sure he had too many resources tied to the side business that probably all he could do was equipment, but a top equipment store, which a hero party should have access to, could probably replace him on that, if they paid attention. Was his firing justified? Yes. Could/should they have done it in a more civil way? Yes. Was his side business important? Yes, but it really wasn't a normal adventurer's job to do. Maybe an adventurer could start doing it, but they really should change jobs after starting to court mage or something along those lines.

Third, his reaction to his firing. Should he have done what he did? Probably yes, if you are not getting compensation to do something like protecting the country, then why should you dedicate all your resources to it. Should he have done it the way he did it? Probably no, instead of all at once, considering the potential impact of doing this, he should have tried to notify the guild or government leadership of the issue, then release or scale back the barriers over like a month or more, giving them time to deal with all the threats or give him a rightful compensation to continue his side business as his primary business.

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  • #3
This book is getting boring. Get to your major point, Abel win and kill Luca,Luke and the children and useless Nyla.  I can't understand the dragging. As far as I am concerned,but Luca and Luke are stupid. Husband and wife that lack love. I am done with this novel. Enjoy your prolonged story.
 
  • #6
I ABSOLUTELY  love this book. But I'm reading the comments and everyone is saying they have been waiting for updates(2mnths ago) I just finished chapter 361 and it says something like it's going to be part of a series or something. anyone know how to find out about rest of series?
 
  • #7
This book is very interesting and happens to keep me occupied and the best part is that the imaginative scenes that is created in my head is better than watching movies ,I mean,it's like you were part of that story and it's just so well made .I love this kind of stories❤
 
  • #8
why did so many names change????? now so many are in Japanese and can hardly follow the story. if this isn't fixed, I will have to quit this story!
 
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