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First of all I've read this to the current chapter in June. I'll give you this I'm a fairly fast reader. I finished this novel in 2 hours to the current chapter though. I've read over 75 web novels but this one takes the cake. Also. I don't like ntr. Even if you try to cheat me and say it's not. It's ntr any way you look at it even if indirect. You'll read over 10 chapters of people realizing how they've wronged the MC in a row which is somewhat satisfying but half are a form of ntr (period.) and his abilities?? I've seen some stuff. I mean harem/fantasy/isekai are my main fav. Genre but I've never seen this ability not to mention how off center it is. It has to do with clock work. But somehow it's omnipotent???? I mean. You're swinging way for the fences arnt you? And then instantly SSS rank? It's like 40 chapters of nothing but bad then bam instantly karma is 180?? Come on. This novel is ludicrous plain and simple. The plot makes things too simple. One ch "trauma". It's sad really it brings up legit trauma and is fixed and forgotten within a paragraph. Timing is screwed up on all kinds of non sense. Most of the obvious problems and terrible plot direction could have been honestly avoided and directed to a better direction and extend the story even but instead it's just tossed out the window and wrote off (honestly for sick individuals who crave pain and suffering for females like why?) It's not my cup of tea take 20 minutes and check you'll read 50 chapters tho. Also. Why does it over complicate things in the weirdest places? I think if they put the effort throughout the whole novel instead in certain areas of the novel the whole thing would have been beneficial honestly. The plot of skills and the church and the guild would become needlessly complicated and everything else was simple and passed over. Ease up on complexity of those situations and put more effort into the plot in all areas and you could have a better composition IMO. The relationships, the importance of the guild ranks the structure of requests backgrounds the solutions I might be being unreasonable for sure but there's so much information here it really makes me want to re write all these chapters in my own fashion. Don't get me wrong I'm not claiming to be an author or superior to the main author or the translator and this might just be my own selfish wish or me voicing my complaints like I'm the best critic but I wanted more. I know I complain a lot but it's because I do that I see a lot of things I wish were better and I think it had a lot of potential. I mean we can all say this MC is obviously boundless because of what he's been through and obviously the possibilities of his powers and the companions since it's written and they are extraordinarily powerful with crazy powers and positions. Anyways I've wrote a lot. Sorry spoilers-and questions?the translator wrote heroines not ntr'd but instead of keeping your characters from the start to dozens of chapters in you just fling them into the wind after they are used. It sounds lazy and unappetizing if you ask me. My opinion thowhy not write the saint into falling for temptation and still sticking with it and not giving up instead of taking a paragraph and writing her off as a lost character who fell completely (ntr) and make her a useless mob after. the pharmacist why write her to be kidnapped and never seen again after being "ntr material". And then she appears 50 chapters later and just is in a sad state. Why? his resentment for his sister is just odd and short lived honestly all the hidden information is just cleared up. Why do authors have to write characters who don't talk and explain things and just over complicate matters instead of being forward and direct. At least many other tittles clear things up in a clear manner. The way this author wrote it just cleared it up without explaining the details. Somehow the characters just know. His sister shows up thinking he is dead and he flips out then she shadow stalks him he flips out again. Then she thinks she can understand why if she flings herself into the abyss which the author just says she's trying to understand him then somehow he shows up and stops her which is now just apparently su*cide. Why? And also how did she understand about the abyss and falling in it?? Also she rampaged in the royal captial and "disappears" and the continuation just comes to an ope and she volunteered for s*avery for her brother. What happened to the money. Literally a safe full. Depth. Information. Give it.the former? Queen? Yea? She try's to get information on him and instead of writing something along the lines of his ab*se and being left for dead for a long time in the dungeon she just gets information of his sss adventure rank. Why just write it like that? You could get some depth if you wrote she got that information first and got some distress and gradually she learns more. It was just lazy if you ask me. Also doesn't specify when she gets it. It's just obvious that she gets it at the time when the chapter inlays with the next. the other s rank adventurer shows up beginning for a baby and his s*ave gets jealous but it just disappears and she talks about understanding that jobs being discriminated against she's familiar with but just says she's a swordsman and no further explanation then we go 20 plus chapters where she just says she's worried about the s*ave since they are the only 2 in the party. Explanations. Depth. Like I said this novel is a 2 hour read but if we cut the unnecessary that's already there you could read this in it's entirety in an hour. I only continued to read this because I wanted the conclusion and skipped a lot of the garbage in between. Honestly I could have just skipped to the last 10 chapters and prob. Been as satisfied instead of reading it in its entirety. His mother acts kinda concerned but is only self centered about living? Which is it. It's hard to be both. If you're worried try to do something. The author makes it sound like she's bothered but is discriminated against but she doesn't mind it. Stabs his accuser to death? And makes a monster hell bent on destroying her son. Lazy. every grudge aside from the mc's is unjustified and they all swear revenge on the MC it's common and annoying. Only 1 person has repented to ish?, another broken, and the last is a broken record. if you're going to make the title a paragraph why don't you write it for what it really is? Ntr. S*aves. R*pe. Tragedy, scum (Whose getting revenge in the revenge r*pe tag? Lol) Nonsense. Triple S rank only matters in a few instances. They haven't even done triple s rank missions in 70 chapters. The church and discrimination is the real problem. 3/4 of the people are just junk. P.S.S if you can write that the possible heroines that were wronged rapped used and sh*t why is the MC getting embarrassed so easily and even past v7 nothing romantic has really progressed even 3 characters a s*ave that's obviously infatuated with her master, and sister of blood relation that wants her brother and a random dark complected woman in the first interaction where she asked for his "seed" and a harem tag but the only thing harem related is that there are 3 females who are interested in the MC. Even the "pharmacist" begged him to lay with her. Yet he is just blushing and getting embarrassed. The author just begged for an ntr to happen to a weak willed protagonist. You'll make him claim to "get revenge" but heal his heart from being a cold bastard except to those who were also wronged and elevate him to being way more powerful than the hero who's slaying pu*sy till being more or less exiled. Why. I think the author is a sadist.
