She Professed Herself The Pupil Of The Wiseman (WN) Chapter 59 Discussion

  • #1
It's an interesting story.

An unknown number of players find themselves in the very game they played as their avatars. Cue in the MC who used an item to change his avatar to his "ideal girl" which is of course is used for story purposes but in a rather good way.

The story has a few twists and interesting takes, but also quite good explanations and resolutions to them.

An example is how the MC views NPC's close to his avatar before and after the Isekai. It doesn't write a thesis about it, but it does explain the MC's feelings and changing of decisions on it.

As for the plot (s) themselves, they're there. Slowly being explored. However this story is also as about the MC discovering the world he now finds himself in and the differences between it and the game. Not to mention the various big and small adventures (s) he goes on.
 
  • #5
How often do you update? I’m enthralled with this book!!!!!
 
  • #6
The waiting for new chapter(s) to be uploaded is killing me!  Despite some grammar and spelling error, keep up the good work, Babe!
 
  • #8
Absolutely freaking AMAZING!! Absolutely love all 3 books and I keep rereading them cause they are just soooooo good!! You seriously need to turn these books into a tv series!! Brilliant work!! The way you are so descriptive in your writing, you pull readers in and we feel like we are actually there
 
  • #11
I like the story. I would have loved to see a little more development at the end.
 
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