- #1
It's so boringi really wanted to push through because I wanted to see the parts where the family gets what they deserve but god it takes too freaking long to get therelike the conflict would be introduced in one chapter, after two chapters will the planning and rising action happen for that specific conflict then another few chapters before the actual conflictand mind u the chapters ain't short so its a lot of fillers that even though you skip a lot, u don't really miss out. I get that the MC is supposed to be oblivious and stuff and tbh the ML does make moves that won't let anyone know he looks at MC any different from a friend, but thats what makes the whole story lag. It would have been fine if there was something (plot wise) happening that was slowly making them closer and the MC realize her feelings, but its all planning and wooing and gosh so boringthe one thing I do like about this is that the OGML of the story does not fall in love with MC. I love that so much and it shows a lot of his struggle for his feelings for the ogFL and his morality and civility. also maybe I just found this boring because I read a similar story to it already and I loved that (I'm going to go look for my father) so judge this for yourself! Its a worth read though as long as ur not in a hurry. Lmao
