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Like many have said it suffer a lot from the constant POV change at the worse possible moment, completely breaking the flow of the novel.Other than the poorly executed POV change constantly taking place, the novel is a decent read. If the the author went back to polish the novel and deal with the POV change, it would be a good read, but it is what to be expected from an unpolished web novel. The constant POV change gives me the impression that the author does not plan out his arc, so when he gets stuck for the next chapter, he creates another POV change until he comes up with something. If you are reading the manga, the manga is obviously more polish, but light-hearted. It does not have the same quality of danger as the web novel content which I find better.
