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Because I’ve Been Reincarnated as the Piggy Duke, This Time I Will Say I Like You (WN) Chapter 3 Discussion

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Sirtiergan1

Sirtiergan1

  • #1
  1. I don't typically like these transmigrated into anime character things because it is usually written in cliche with no real background info to be engaged/drawn into the story
  2. Doesn't really have set goal and seems like author is trying to write out on the plot of the anime which made me not like it as the anime isn't known to us (at least I'm guessing its made up anime)
  3. Background is too simple lacks things that are unique
  4. Repetitive
  5. Lighthearted but dull tragic
  6. Author trys to make this like an under-rated MC
  7. Reading it these 3 chapters made the book seem to lack anything that stood out to me and made the book seem dull
 
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Stivanstin

Stivanstin

  • #4
Thank you everyone who has taken the time to read my story and leave me feedback. I’m currently in the process of updating the earlier chapters to make it more appealing and interesting and add elements that have been missing the first time around. Feel free to leave me a comment with suggestions ...
 
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DarkShadow4384

DarkShadow4384

  • #5
The story started out good then it becomes repetitive and boring not to mention the names being mixed up. It seems like the author is getting confused too with what was mentioned at the previous chapters. I hope it doesn’t get to 1000 chapter before Sean finds out that the kids are his.
 
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RavenDiamond

RavenDiamond

  • #7
the story line is pleasing, nice to see actual character development of the main character and how that happened, and the development of the \"villian grandfather\" into ??? ooops no spoilers .... definitely needs edits, a good quick read
 
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Tenshaiki34E

Tenshaiki34E

  • #8
Such a great book! I have truly enjoyed all of your books and so excited to read Riley’s book along with Carlos and Paul’s story’s! Also looking forward to the future alpha/luna story’s in the future.. sounds like they’re children are already close :)
 
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doge_doge_0250

doge_doge_0250

  • #9
Wow!! Fantastic twist of events.  I am thinking Reid's story is next and wondering how the segue will play out.  Of course Brock has to save Astrid.  Could Reid be his wingman?  Love it!!
 
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RexFiction

RexFiction

  • #11
is this book finished or unfinished? i don't want to waist my tym and money if it is not yet completed.
 
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