The Main Heroines are Trying to Kill Me Chapter 86 Discussion

  • Thread starter JacobHarding
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  • #1
I like the premise, and was very into the story at first. In the beginning especially, it was interesting watching him be a self-sacrificing hero who has to save people while pretending to be evil. After a few people realize who he is the story fell flat for me. It turns into your stock harem story with your typical exaggerated sacrificial MC. I don't have anything against characters who are excessively kind and self-sacrificing, but with how the story is written it's boring. There was a certain magical tragic atmosphere when MC was absolutely alone, with nobody recognizing his good deeds.

There were inconsistencies in the text too, like the author stating that Dark Pacts cannot be revealed to anyone other than those who witnessed it, but then having one of the heroines casually revealing her dark pact to another heroine.

The story had promise at first, but it turned into another shallow series.
 
  • #7
Comment continues here.... Author you need to stop getting drunk before you start to write this trash. Because you are writing god knows what even after 1.1k chapter there no progress.
 
  • #8
I need another chapter I keep checking lol
 
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