- #1
Very good. The setup with the system is a little much. The limits imposed by the system get a little much and the heroines get annoying but the author knows when to play it back and let them find out the truth just in time to keep your interest. Kania first girl, best girl. Serena close second. The execution for the reveal to Clana was forced but very much needed and well timed since she was beginning to get annoying. The reveal for Ferloche was really confusing. She got way too annoying because of her inherent silly character type and because she was the last of the main heroines to learn the truth.But like, honestly, it's way too much and I can't read more... I'm sure a lot of people like it.
