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Super good. World building is amazing. Smart characters are actually really smart. No huge info dumps. Things happen naturally. So many freaking things are taken into account. The foreboding is fantastic. And I'm in love.edit: I actually got to chapter 200-300 or something before dropping. A lot of things didn't make sense. Biggest thing was Spoiler
he has s*x with a goddess so they can have a demi-god baby and share an alliance. After s*x, she gives him a complete power (that is extremely hard to collect, especially when it gets down to last bits) because she said it was incompatible with her main, but incomplete, power.
The powers were Life and Light, respectively. How are they not compatible. Additionally, the complete, Life power gave her control over her subjects, elves. Life doesn't have the same power over other races or anything, so it was a guaranteed lost investment.
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