The Time-Stop Breeding Uncle Wants to Retire Chapter 22 Discussion

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  • #1
It's okay, good for a laugh or two. But the implementation is mediocre and entertainment value lies solely on the gimmick.

This is one of those stories that constantly has the protagonist narrating their internal thoughts. For every half a page of plot, there's a full page of narration from the protagonist.

The synopsis is rather misleading as well. The story doesn't take place after the protagonist became the hero. No, it starts when the protagonist transmigrates. The synopsis is just the author spoiling the ending. Which as of chapter 22, hasn't happened yet. At the rate we're going, I'd guess the protagonist won't kill the demon lord for at least another 100 chapters.

This is a story that was written by the seat of the author's pants. Nothing lands particularly well, nothing feels all that clever, the novel lives and dies by how interested you are in the gimmick.
 
  • #4
Is this the sequel to your first book
 
  • #6
Don’t waste your time on this book, it makes no sense.
 
  • #8
The way the author wrote her story sent me chills. I got hooked by just reading it's prologue. Thumbs up!
 
  • #9
Don’t be tag as a 419 guy, just finish your story, we will buy it all. And it an interesting story to kudos
 
  • #10
Now James refused to marry Sienna but is now is forced AGAIN to marry Melinda!!! Ahahha how much more redundant can you get author! It's so dumb!
 
  • #11
So happy to get some updates after a 20 day cliffhanger. The writer is brilliant in moving your heart and unfortunately we have to wait to get some hope. Today’s update was zero hope for Madelyn and a view of how cruel and evil Zach is. My days will be ruined if all I read is bad people winning
 
  • #12
First 500 chapters are very good but now it’s becoming childish the way characters behave
 
  • #13
damn so much passion so much mystery so much pain so much love amazing!
 
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