Memoirs of the Returnee Chapter 21 Discussion

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Maybe I am a bit too nitpicky but this is a "because plot" novel.

"Notepad" power is not a notepad power. It's whatever plot demands power. It started as a thing that let him remember the future because he wrote it as a diary meticulously and I was willing to overlook the attached magical battery from the future. By chapter 21 it's something that lets him remember his entire past life, copy paste power of a magic microscope in his eyes, copy paste mana heart into a body.

Our poor sickly orphan somehow knows multiple celebrity young masters most who hates MCs guts. Yet so far they didn't do anything to him, despite MC constantly backtalking and antagonizing them including breaking their stuff. Normally on a decentish novel I'd trust the author suspend my disbelief and expect it to be explained in future. But since author is pantsing the premise with plot notebook I can't.
 
  • #2
I absolutely loved this book, it was a great read for me. So I say to you; the author don’t stop doing what you do, because you are f$&king awesome.
 
  • #3
The story is good, but the grammar and sentence structure are just horrible. I’m sure author will improve over time.
 
  • #4
This story makes me want a man like Gresso
 
  • #5
Could not put it down!!!!! You are an amazing writer, I get so hooked on your books that I read them in a few days!!!!!! Loved it!!!!!!!
 
  • #6
I love this book, and only on chapter 9, keep it up r c brie, I'll be here until the end lol
 
  • #7
Dear lord the honeymoon is about to begin. I hope without any drama
 
  • #8
hey author do you think you are still alive if you get the same torture you are inflicting on Tina?
 
  • #12
cant wait for next chapters to open
 
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