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Sooo... what to say? It feels like a really bad harem with a Yuri theme with the writer wanting to lean heavily towards a seinen audience. It's got a lot of the typically negative aspects of the genres without really trying to do anything different. I can't help but think that the author is a guy that didn't want to write a male protagonist but still wanted to follow trends. And since this is probably a webnovel published purely online they also go a bit crazy with some of the questionable and... seedier aspects of characters and their lives.Plenty of S*xu@l Harassment and even a little bit of r@p3 mixed in there for good measure. The amount of "yuri" harems, genderbender "yuri" harems, and male fantasy material lately has just been a massive disappointment. I want to read yuri because I enjoy yuri, not because I'm looking for something written for men or with a male protagonist pretending to be a woman. I guess the only redeeming factor for this one is that it doesn't fall into the latter category. Though there is usually a theme with these types of stories that the MC is only a lesbian because they had a trauma with men and they're afraid of them now. As if a female protagonist can't be interested in women unless they have some life-altering tragedy in their past. Blarg.It can be a cute and fluffy slice of life sometimes I guess, but those parts completely fall apart when you think about the more serious topics the story either pretends aren't that serious or just flat out makes fun of.Basically, not my cup of tea.I have noticed one thing about webnovels that I'd like to share with potential readers. Any novel that begins to exceed 150+ chapters might eventually follow trends and drag things out, usually losing focus or doing some terrible crap. The higher the chapter count, the worse the novel usually is. Anything over 200 can usually be given an instant pass. I just like yuri so I tend to punish myself by trying to read even the crappiest of them.A good guide for novel readers: 200+ chapters and ongoing = bad.
